Recruitment/Wessex video

[Manus Dei]

lol That's actually pretty damn good...

Really damn good.

How about change "form the mortar from which" to "form the mortar with which" because form and from confuse the eye for a moment...

Maybe you can add some sounds of horses whinnying and snorting in between the text?

And can you animate the lens flare? There are some premade animated lens flares on flashkit.com . You just drop the little scene into the larger movie at that place.

Really great intro. What's gonna come after this? What is this a segue into?

[Bernardo dei Medici]

Alrighty, did some tweaking and I think it turned out much better. Added one of the images back in with some warfare sound in the background in between the text.

Modded the lense flare just a bit so that it flows a little more smoothly.

http://www.silversunrepublic.com/bra...X/wsxintro.wmv

Not really sure what will come of the rest of it. People asked for a graphical intro so I figured I'd give it to em :P

Maybe I'll take the drill videos and put them in with this intro.

[Chrono Veincrusher]

It wouldn't hurt to extend the period the first and second intro text is being aired. Right now you don't have time to read it all with a bit of margin.

[Bernardo dei Medici]

Done.

[Thirlan Tyrandor]

Everything is good except I think you should pick a different background music. That song has been used in SOOO many movie trailers and other various productions that it makes it too clich? for use.

[Bernardo dei Medici]

Everything is good except I think you should pick a different background music. That song has been used in SOOO many movie trailers and other various productions that it makes it too clich? for use.

Awwwww ... yeah, I tried to find some other song, but I couldn't remember what the title was so I settled for this.

[Manus Dei]

Sir Thirlan, can your brother finish the face of my character's portrait? If he does, I think including his paintings as a kind of montage in the rest of this movie would make something really incredible.

[Zora Flynn]

Very nice work, Brando!

[Thirlan Tyrandor]

Sir Thirlan, can your brother finish the face of my character's portrait? If he does, I think including his paintings as a kind of montage in the rest of this movie would make something really incredible.

I'll talk with him about that your Grace... I think he may have dozed off.

[Servus]

give me some time and i may do more things for your intro other then just a portrait. As it stands my days are slightly occupied so to speak, but given two weeks i may be able to bring forth some roughs if you wish. Bear in mind that i do not do 3D work.